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Dear George,
I would like to thank you for joining in most of our games and helping both teams with support and kindness. I appreciate you giving up your time and waking up super early to make breakfast. Thank too for helping prepare lunch, and dinner.
You show love towards all the Year 7s and 8s by asking if they need help to find anything or asking if they are okay. You did everything you could to make it fun. My favourite part was you telling Kata, Gabby and I in the car your life time story of how you came from Africa. I also enjoyed how you met all types of people on your travels. You are a big inspirational person and without you I would have been late to most of my Activities and would have let my group down. I just want to give you one last thank you for the support and this letter is to show my appreciation.
Thank you,
From Keita.
Keita your letter is very kind. It must have been really interesting to learn George's life story. Maybe next time proofread your writing and use a reader-writer to speak what you have written to ensure there are no mistakes for example: "Thank too" rather than "Thank you" or "You show love " rather than "You showed love". Was this the best camp you have been on?
ReplyDeleteThank you and yes it was very interesting.And yes it has been one of my favourite camps
Deletekeita I thought that your letter was very describing,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you put your favourite part with george,I bet it would have been very interesting learning about how george came from Africa.I think next time you need to proofread your letter or story to make sure that it makes sense
Thank you and next time i will double check that it makes sense.
DeleteYou are welcome Keita.
Deleteyour letter is very kind and describing it was interesting how you said you listened to Georges story in Africa you can work on proofreading your writing good job
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